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My chest is tightening, I know it's coming
as I choke back the tears that have so long been building.
Letting myself go for only one day
praying if I write it, this pain will go away.
Shuddering breath and trembling fingers,
I try to hold it in but I can feel it rising.

So when can I release this tension inside me?
Even though I speak to you, I feel like I'm hiding.
Thoughts shrouded in my heart
Feelings flowing through my veins
Questions forming, doubts arising
Screaming Into the Night.
©2009 ~moth-seraph
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Finally, a bit of writing.

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~Swords-and-Bandages May 10, 2009, 10:33:44 PM
Are you the type that don't want to cry in front of anyone?

--
"You can no longer function as a man."

-Adriana La Cerva, The Sopranos
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~moth-seraph May 13, 2009, 5:25:40 PM
Eh. It depends on the day, and who's around. If it's my friends, I'll cry freely. If I'm in public, I cry silently. Why do you ask?
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~Swords-and-Bandages May 13, 2009, 11:42:45 PM
Your poem reminded me a little of myself. I try to not cry in front of anyone.

--
"You can no longer function as a man."

-Adriana La Cerva, The Sopranos
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~moth-seraph May 14, 2009, 11:06:15 AM
When I wrote this, and was feeling this, I wasn't actually AROUND anyone. I was in my room, but the feeling building up was an ear splitting scream of frustration and pain....
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~Swords-and-Bandages May 14, 2009, 3:54:21 PM
Silence can be oppressive.

--
"You can no longer function as a man."

-Adriana La Cerva, The Sopranos
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~moth-seraph May 15, 2009, 12:00:32 AM
It can be a lot of things. Mainly, painful.
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~Swords-and-Bandages May 15, 2009, 7:50:04 PM
Cheap thrills are good pain relievers. Particularly the kind that give you the zero-g experience.

--
"You can no longer function as a man."

-Adriana La Cerva, The Sopranos
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~falloutgrrl May 29, 2009, 8:33:56 AM
*sobs*

:heart: it

--
I’m into EMO stuff, so I must CUT MYSELF
I'm BLONDE, so I MUST be STUPID
I’m QUIET, so I must be SHY

I'm a PERSON, so I MUST be LABELED.

Fall Out Boy/ Patrick Stump fans, go here:
:heart: [link] :heart:
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~moth-seraph May 29, 2009, 10:07:57 AM
Thank you, very much. I'm glad it moved you, though I'm sorry for the sobs :)

Feel free to check out the rest of my writing.

And again, thanks for the comment and for enjoying my work :)
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